“You can’t fail if you don’t quit. You can’t succeed if you don’t start.”
I'll be perfectly honest. I have made numerous mistakes as a writer, and my first draft was one of them. Or rather, I should say my lack of a first draft. Hopefully, this post will prevent you from making the same mistakes I did as a young writer.
Unfortunately, when you write a novel, you can't just type it out and then go over it once to check for spelling and grammatical errors. In order to write a decent book, you need to write several drafts, or preliminary versions of your book before you can begin to consider sending it out to beta readers or to a publishing house. My mistake was that I wrote my first draft and called it quits. Only minor modifications.
That was a mistake, because the first draft is just one of many, and it is never the actual book.
While there are a number of drafts in the process of writing a novel, the first draft, I find, is the one that most writers seem to have trouble with. Especially if they are perfectionists like myself. You see, the first draft is never meant to be the real story. It's all your ideas, everything you have in your head, sloppily transcribed onto a Word or Google document. There are going to be plot holes, inconsistencies, missing characters, and so much more. Your first draft is the unformed lump of clay. All your ideas, good and bad, squashed together and making almost no sense.
The second draft (the stage I am currently going through in the writing of my own novel) is where you take that lump of clay - sticking to the metaphor here - and begin to slowly shape it into something new. It's where you begin to work out all that mumbo-jumbo that you wrote in the first draft. Also, don't expect your second draft to be a slight revision of the first. A lump of clay is never the same after the potter begins to mold it. Same thing with your second draft. It will be completely different than the first. With me, only a few chapters stayed relatively the same and I ended having to redo my magic system, add a whole other world, and rewrite seventeen to twenty chapters.
What does this mean? Well it means this: Expect your first draft to be a mess. When you are writing your first draft, don't try and get it "right" or fix something whenever your run across an inconstancy or plot hole. Just write. Write out every idea and everything on your mind. Once you've finished your first draft and move on to the second, just be prepared to do a lot of editing because that's the way it's meant to be.
Remember: first draft is the lump of clay - all your unpolished ideas. The second, is when you start to mold that lump into something totally new and amazing.
~Lydia R. Sherren